I spent some time over lunch today with a piece of graph paper and drew out a quick map of the relationships floating around in my head. Then I cleaned it up and put it into Excel so I could post it here. Here are my thoughts on the above diagram:
- It looks like I have two axis of conflict: Seelie/Unseelie and Angel/Fallen.
- "The Ban". I like the sound of that. It's the agreement between heaven and hell on leaving mankind alone. What it says, specifically, is: "No Immortal Angel may directly affect the mortal world."
- The Angels have powers, different on both sides:
- Micheal: Fighting, he is very good at it. None can stand against him. He is also able to heal all but mortal wounds very, very quickly.
- Apollyon: Telekinesis and wall walking.
- Both Angles are telepathic.
- Apollyon is getting around the ban by having the unseelie court summon him to a un-buried body, while Michael is just possessing Mark.
- Mark is going to seek allies from the seelie court once Lightning tells him about it.
Now for the characters, as they sit right now:
- Mark Nealson - Graphic Designer, Martial Artist (Kung Fu and Tai Chi), Father, Husband, Cyclist, Collector of Comics Books
- Kaylah Nealson - Former Accountant, Marital Artist (see Mark), Mother, Wife, Web Comic Author, MS
- William Nealson - 10 Year Old, Video Game Enthusiast, Yu-Gi-Oh Tournament Dueler, Practical Joker
- Victoria Nealson - 6 Year Old, Likes Stuffed Animals and Horses, Watching Television, Sweet tooth
- Lightning - House cat, Black with white lightning shaped blaze, Cat Sidhe, servitor of the Summer Queen
- Michael - Archangel, Protector of the weak, Lecherous. Takes over control if Mark is daydreaming.
- Appollyon - Fallen angel, patron of violent death, cruel, cold, and manipulative
- Queen Morgause - Queen of the Winter Sidhe and the Unseelie Court, Dislikes all Angels but sees this conflict as a way to spread chaos and change.
- Queen Uonaidh - Queen of the Summer Sidhe and the Seelie Court, Not fond of the Angels, dislikes the fallen. Honor and beauty above all else.
Okay, a few points. The family is based on my own, with tweaks to change things up a bit. The Angel taking over when Mark is not paying attention come from personal experience. Sort of.
I earned my Black Belt in Kung Fu a number of years ago and picked up some Tai Chi along the way. Be patient, this is needed. Turns out I had a gift for sparring, linking speed and size. One of the older black belts took me under his wing while I was still around blue belt, and he would spout these sentences that made absolutely no sense with words I completely understood. And he was American!
Like, "Be the calm int he center of the storm", or even, "Flow like water". Now, it makes sense. No I can't explain it any better. You just have to experience it. Yup, that sucks, but that's the way it goes.
With that background, you can understand what I'm talking abut. He would regularly clean my clock in sparring. One day, as we rotated to new sparring partners, I wound up paired with him. I started thing how much this was going to hurt, how embarrassing this was to get cleaned by someone half my size and older to boot. Then I heard the instructor shouting "Break!" which was weird because I didn't remember hearing the "Begin!".
The black belt was lying on the ground several feet away. He picked himself gingerly off the ground, leaned in and said, "Nice sweep, but the kick and the punch on the way down was probably overkill." I still have no memory of the match. At all. I wasn't paying attention and my body took over in self defense.
That was the seed of the idea that was planted for this novel. What if an Angel took over in a moment of distraction? Why? What would be going on? If Angels can interfere, why not the Fallen, and if the Fallen, why not the Fey?
From questions, comes novels...
Next time, I think I'm going to snowflake a little...
Write On!